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Dragon in the Sky by Rametic

:iconherr-drosselmeyer:
I really like your lines, they're very crisp and clear, you have good detail with the skin texture and in the dragons face especially. I love that the wings look like webbed hands, as if the dragon has an extra set of arms, that's how dragon wings should be, in my opinion. The arm and leg in the back of the picture feel a bit awkward to me without the same detail you put into the limbs at the front, but I don't think you necessarily need to change that, it's just a matter of opinion. I would suggest that you fill in the eye with at least some kind of indication of dimension, as it feels a tad flat to me.

I do really love the head, the design and the details, you're very talented and I admire your work.
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:iconelrinazuza:
ElRinaZuza Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It is real critique, at least quite adequate! Unfortunately it's too short from my point of view.
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:iconherr-drosselmeyer:
Herr-Drosselmeyer Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, a critique on my critique, :) I couldn't think of much more to say without being redundant, I agree that it is a bit on the short side.
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:iconelrinazuza:
ElRinaZuza Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
In fact I didn't want to hurt your feelings! I said that I liked you honesty. How short it is, it is only my point of view and nothing more scarry!
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:iconherr-drosselmeyer:
Herr-Drosselmeyer Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My feelings aren't hurt, I'm pleased you commented. Thank you.
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:iconelrinazuza:
ElRinaZuza Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're always welcome!
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